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README.md

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 The agreement is a living document. We will improve upon it as it is used. Feel free to make suggestions.
 
 Yours in service to truth,
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 -Patrick

Tensor Debate Method.md

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 Version 2.6 by Patrick Smith
 
-## Rules and Agreements:
-### Definitions:
+## Introduction
+Public discourse and especially debate on the internet has evolved into something almost entirely entertainment focused. Participants argue, interrupt, insult, misquote, goal post move, motte and bailey, quote studies no one has heard of or had time to review, and even start yelling in an attempt to "win" the day.
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+On the other end of the spectrum you have the Lincoln-Douglas format and others that are so rigid and specifically anti-conversational that viewers often find themselves reaching the end of the debate having never really felt like the meat of the positions and rebuttals were addressed.
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+The Oxford-style debate format has the participants spending a significant amount of time responding to audience and moderator questions and prompts instead of with their subject-matter expert opponents.
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+The Tensor Debate Method aims to design the optimal method of discourse for the modern information age. It requires a commitment from all involved, even the audience, to a search for truth as the ultimate goal, a love for finding out one was wrong, participants open to changing their minds if presented with sufficient reason and evidence, and an earnest affording of good faith and charitability by and for everyone.
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+The agreement is a living document. We will improve upon it as it is used. Feel free to make suggestions.
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+Yours in service to truth,
+
+-Patrick Smith
+
+## Rules and Agreements
+### Definitions
 **Truth**: That which is logically consistent (conforms to rules of reason) and congruent with the evidence (conforms to reality).
 
-### Goals:
+### Goals
 - There are three primary goals of this engagement. All three must be served at all times.
   - Be partners in a search for Truth.
   - Audience education and understanding.
   - Conform to rules of reason (logic) and evidence (facts)
 - The “style” of the debate should be to make productive back and forth conversation.
 
-### The Audience (moderator):
+### The Audience (moderator)
 - Represents the audience.
 - Actively participates.
 - Makes sure terms are defined.
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 - Elicits the best possible steel man positions from all participants.
 - If at any time the debate ceases to serve the goals they end the debate.
 
-### Participants:
+### Participants
 - Arrive with an attitude of hoping to be proven wrong and a willingness to learn new things from the others.
 - Recognize the good will in each other and treat the other with respect, kindness, and generosity. The “benefit of the doubt” should be given to all involved.
 - Defer the “talking stick” to the audience (moderator) at all times. Consider the moderator speaking as the audience speaking, and no one should *ever* talk over the audience. Mics will be muted if it comes to it, though this should never be needed.
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   - A well lit environment.
   - An environment that will be available for the duration of the debate.
 
-## Live Audience Rules:
+## Live Audience Rules
 1. Members of the audience should be as genuine and respectful as the debate participants. Their comments may be displayed on screen in real time and will be seen by the participants.
 2. The audience should help foster a good quest for truth and avoid toxicity.
 3. The audience should assume that all participants are operating in good faith and are deserving of respect.
 4. Ask thoughtful questions!
 
-## Preparation (discovery):
+## Preparation (discovery)
 1. All participants must come to agree on a specific proposition to be debated beforehand. The proposition must be falsifiable / have a NULL hypothesis. For example: “Gravity on Earth equals 9.81 m/s2”.
 2. All participants must agree on a maximum duration for the debate beforehand.
 3. Participants must provide the resources they intend to cite well before the day of the debate and refrain from citing resources not offered during discovery without good justification (determined by the audience (moderator)).
 
-## Part 1 - Introductions:
+## Part 1 - Introductions
 - All participants should make sure to:
   - Introduce themselves with information on their reason for and depth of study of the topic and any relevant credentials.
   - State their faction (proponent / opponent)
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   - Summarize their epistemology (their method of knowing the proposition is false).
   - Summarize their points of opposition.
 
-## Part 2 - Conversation:
+## Part 2 - Conversation
 - This should be a 3 way back and forth discussion between the participants and the audience (moderator) with the participants getting the lion share of the time with each other.
 - The conversation should be a deep dive starting at the top with agreeing on definitions and then following the logic down until truth is arrived at on the proposition at hand. Try to stay on topic, follow the flow of the conversation, and not wander. If you are not sure about digressing or changing topics, just ask the moderator.
 - Quality questions may be taken and presented by the audience at appropriate times by the moderator if deemed productive, though audience interaction is a tertiary concern. Evidence from the audience that something is unclear, undefined, or needs more explanation should signal the moderator to make sure they are representing the audience-goal well.
 - The moderator will call an end to the debate when the maximum time is reached, when truth has been found, or if the debate becomes unproductive or toxic.
 - If an impasse is reached the debate may be halted and reset for a future date after both sides have further researched the proposition.
 
-## Part 3 - Closes:
+## Part 3 - Closes
 All participants should make sure to:
 - State what their position is after the debate.
 - State why they changed or remained the same by reiterating the arguments and facts that they learned, or that were not addressed, or how they were addressed to their satisfaction or dissatisfaction.
 - List resources for the audience to study on their own.
 - Keep it short. The debate is already over. Wrap it up in a few minutes.
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+## Feedback and Suggestions
+Feedback and suggestions are always welcome. You may contact Patrick (Not Governor) on the Disenthrall discord server: [Join Link](https://disenthrall.me/discord/)
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+Patrick can also sometimes be reached on Twitter: [@NotGovernor](https://twitter.com/NotGovernor)